In the Depths of Death: Do you like my poem?

Jante--This poem is very good---it's golden-----it's kicken chicken!--It brings to mind many of the questions we lifelings have about crossing over. Your title is also good-with it's meaning, and the two rhyming words. You have talent, keep persuing it. Also, search and read the last nine lines of ''Thanatopsis'' by William Cullen Bryant--those 9 lines(which a teacher had me memorize) have guided me through my life--in my beliefs about death.---Great Job----------------------william